The Roman Empire was a good place to live for many reasons. First of all Rome had a good army to protect their citizens. The Roman army conquared a lot of land.
Some of those countries were: Britain, Spain, France, Italy, Egypt, and Germany.
My second reason is that Rome was a democracy type of government.
Democracy means government by the people. It is when people can vote,
participate in the senate and other rights. People were having rights to
do what they wanted to do, but still they have to follow the laws of Rome.
My third reason is that Rome had many different entertainment that
patricians made they are: gladiator fights, chariot races, circuses,
and amphitheaters. Rome was a pretty fun place to live in.
Rome had also public baths to go. It was a place were people
come to rest after all their work and jobs. That way they
also were clean.
I think your paragraphs were pretty good. I think you should add a little bit more conclusion.. Everything els is pretty good :)
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